The Vatican Book Two - Secondary Recruitment

I haven't blogged much about the second book in my series, but I've finished it and moved onto the third in the series. Although I haven't edited it yet. I'm looking forward to being able to bring this series to people and have their feedback.

This book brings in more bad guys for Rhiane to deal with while testing her inner strength and whit. I actually loved writing this edition (as I did with the first one) and can't wait to keep writing the third.

I'm also currently looking into alternative publishing means such as publishing through Amazon. I'm still trying the traditional method however. I just want to find the best option for me.

Hope y'all are enjoying your lives XD

Marvel VS DC (Movies)

I love all the superhero movies which have been coming out in the last few years and there is, of course, two title holders in this fight. DC comics with Superman and Batman, and Marvel with characters like Ironman, Thor and Captain America.
Normally I wouldn't bother trying to compare two companies like these, but I'm far too tempted not to.
It just seems that DC has a better artistic touch with their movies. Although, I do think that Christopher Nolan has a huge impact on that. Anything he touches seems to turn to gold, and he's put his bat in with DC.
Don't get me wrong though, I love the Marvel movies too, especially when they're all put in a group to form The Avengers. The dynamic between the characters is impossible not to laugh at and truly enjoy.
What's sparked this out of the blue post is that I watched Man of Steel last night. It was a good movie, if not a bit long in the final action scene. I enjoyed it none the less. What I did take note of however, was the personal touches that it had that Marvel seems to lack a little. The filmography was done with people in mind. Simple shots of a dogs face or rain filling up a bucket of pegs.
Being a writer, I knew immediately that they were trying to endear the character and situation to the viewer, but IT WORKED.
The muscle bound figure of Henry Cavill suddenly seemed soft, warm and homely. The character of tough as boots Superman was given a soft, family orientated side. Maybe it's just because I'm a girl, but I thought the effect was brilliant to add to a story everyone knows. It's moments like that when I think that Marvel needs to pick up the ball without dodging it. Emotion is a human condition. It's what it means to be alive, so sometimes a simple action flick isn't enough. Sure, it'll make money, but it won't make loyalty, and if you're trying to do what Marvel is doing, you need loyalty.

Savages

Savages, directed by Olivier Stone, staring Blake Lively, Aaron Taylor-Johnson, Taylor Kitsch, John Travolta and Salma Hayek, was actually a better movie than I'd expected it was going to be. Admittedly I didn't know much about it before I watched it, I'd only heard of it once on an interview I happened to see with John Travolta. The trailer made it look like an alright movie, but I was skeptical about what sort of quality it was going to be. As a writer I tend to pick up on things in a story line which are lacking, or in this case, done quite well.

This has to be one of the first depictions that I've seen which showed a working polyamorous relationship, which wasn't a negative aspect of the plot. It bugs me somewhat that polyamory is generally shown in such a way which is negatively connotative. Where it's not a huge deal to me personally, I know others who have been in polyamorous relationships, and they don't always have to be bad things. For me, a prejudice against it is the same as any other prejudice. It would be in the same category as homophobia to me. The fact that it's shown in a way within this movie which is healthy and conducive to positivism, made this movie easier to watch, and gave it some intrigue as well.

I thought the writing and execution was very well done. The plot was engaging, and the back-story was deep enough that it was interesting, but not so deep that it took away from the current story being told. I also thought the casting was particularly well done. Every role was played amazingly and very believably. There are other things which I enjoyed about this film, but a lot of them are very specific, and I wouldn't want to ruin it for anyone. I would, however, like to encourage more people to see it. It's full of action and is fast paced, but it also has the romantic side to the story which helps to balance it. I thought it was a well rounded film that gave just the right amount of every piece of information.

Lawless

Two nights ago I watched John Hillcoat's 'Lawless'. I loved this movie. It is a bit on the gory side, so if you don't like blood, maybe it's not for you. This movie truly wasn't what i was expecting. I was on the edge of my seat most of the movie, waiting to know what happened next.
The story revolves around the three Bondurant brothers back in the prohibition era of the United States. It's all about their struggle trying to make ends meet through Moon Shine.

Shia LeBeouf plays the main character in this film. His portrayal of Jack Bondurant showed real talent. I was really impressed. He gave the piece a believability, and produced an affection for the characters. He made me really want the bootleggers to succeed.

This is yet another movie where Tom Hardy played his role exceptionally. It seems that every movie I watch with him in, his voice changes. He puts on so many different accents that I'm actually not sure what his real voice sounds like. He plays every role I've seen with a dedication and skill which is hard to find. I really am a huge fan now. Just like Shia LeBeouf, he also added and endearing quality to his role.

Over all, I quite enjoyed this movie. The soundtrack was good, the direction brilliant and the acting was outstanding, from all those involved. I'd watch this movie again if I could and would love to own it rather than just renting it. It's a good watch for anyone who likes a bit of action.

Second Day, Second Year

Year two of my university has come around and I have to say I'm excited. I'm taking courses which I actually want to take, rather than having to, and I'm actually going to be able to let my creativity run away with itself every now and again.

At the end of high school the concept of uni was petrifying to me. I had people believing I was excited, and I was, but those who knew me also knew the fear that was putting holes in my self esteem when it came to academics. If it hadn't been for my family and friends, I wouldn't of moved onto university.
The reason I'm saying this now is due to an epiphany I had only a few hours ago. Schooling, at all levels, is not simply a process between teacher and student. We need to support our children in all their endeavors. Young people need to be reminded constantly that they are capable of doing whatever they dream.
I avoided Chemistry because I talked myself out of it. It is one hundred percent my fault that I didn't do it, but I think the role of the teacher is not only to share knowledge. Our teaches need to tell our kids not only how they can improve, but what they're good at and what they've already improved on. If I'd had an unbiased eye about my marks in chemistry, then I wouldn't of had any doubt about my abilities.

I think it's extremely important to get our young members of society into universities, or some form of education after high school. Uni is not only a growth of knowledge, but it helps to form you into who you'll be. The experience of tertiary study gives a confidence which is hard to explain, and I believe, it sets a person up for life. 

Number Two

While I'm still in the editing stages of my first 'Vatican' book, the second in the series is starting to take some sort of form. I've been writing my ass off, and my summer holidays have allowed me to get an average of five pages done per day. That's even taking into account the odd day where I'm unable to fit writing into my day.
The second book develops the tale of the two sisters, Rhiane and Abigail. The younger of the two, Abigail, plays a greater part in this book compared to the first book, and her character is developed into a more solid entity. The trials of the girls continue with a new list of friends and foes added into the fold.
Relationships across the board reach greater depths and new understandings. Rhiane's workmates become people with history and stories of their own to tell. Their histories are worked into the second book, at times in very emotional ways. Where the first book explains some of what the main men went through, the second book will delve deep into their mental states.
I'm still working on an appropriate title for the second book in this series, but while I'm working on the skeleton of the second book, here's another snippet of the first installment. In a previous post I promised a snippet from the thirteenth chapter, so now I'm delivering on that promise.

“Get your questions out of the way quick so I can give you some morphine.” He said and Anton grabbed a chair, pulling it closer to the bed.

“Barney thought you were dead, what happened?” I asked with my voice slightly squeaky. I was so happy to see him.

“I was knocked unconscious. They’d called a med team before they left to get help. If they hadn’t made that call, I’d be dead, but if they hadn’t left, Zeb, Cass and Tech would be dead.” He said and his smile had something hidden in it.

“What else is there?” I asked and he looked down, away from me.

“You almost died. Literally, your heart stopped twice. There was so much internal bleeding. We all thought we’d gotten you killed.” He said and I just lay there for a moment and looked at him.

“It’s something that comes with the job. When I agreed to take the job, I knew what I was getting into, I knew I could have near death experiences, or even get killed.” I replied and he looked up at me and shook his head.

As always the copyright belongs to me. I hope you enjoyed this brief extract. 

First Draft... Done!

I am happy to announce that on sunday I finished the first draft of 'The Vatican'. It currently sits at 63,744 words before editing. I need to do some extensive work on editing to make sure my grammar and spelling is as accurate as possible and there are some scenes I want to add in.
Once I've finished my personal editing, I'll be handing it to a good friend for her to look over. She'll pick out anything I've missed and give me some critiques. After all that, I'll be submitting it to publishers. Within the year I'll be going through the motions of getting my book submitted to publishers, and hopefully have it on shelves soon.
When I've got another step completed, I'll do another update. For now I'm off to do some more editing. 

The Dark Night Rises

When on holiday with my dad, one of the movies we rented was 'The Dark Knight Rises' starring Christian Bale and directed by Christopher Nolan. I've loved the combination of these two people with their take of the Batman story. My opinion, for this movie, is that it's the best out of the three. It was well written, equally as well directed and the acting was top quality. I don't have any criticism of this movie.
The casting was brilliant. Tom Hardy played Bane and the justice he did to the character was amazing. I applaud his performance. I really think he's someone to be watched over the next few years. He could develop into a really brilliant actor, he's well on his way.
This is also one of the only movies I've seen with Anne Hathaway where she didn't annoy me. Usually she gets on my nerves, but in this, I thought she really did well. Her performance in this film proved my perception of her wrong.
Joseph Gordon-Levitt also played his role with skill. I remember him first from his role in'Third Rock from the Sun' then for his part in '500 Days of Summer' and later 'Inception'. A good friend of mine also has a huge celeb crush on him, so he's impossible for me to forget. His interpretation of his character in Batman has made him stand out even more to me.
And, as always, Christian Bale took the role of Batman and Bruce Wane to unbelievable heights. His skill in this role always amazes me.
I give this movie the highest rating. I loved it. If you haven't seen it, then I recommend you do.